Финальные штрихи 3

scenes/Day1.tscn

@@ -200,14 +200,14 @@ position = Vector2(351, 14)
 NPCName = "Cook"
 Frames = ExtResource("4_ephn1")
 DefaultDialogLine = "Get your ration"
-DialogLines = ["Ahoy, mate. What type of food you want?", "Let me look what i have here", "Hmm... canned tuna", "canned bitroots", "canned carrots", "canned potato knishes", "Oh, look surstromming", "It should certanly be banned as bio weapon"]
+DialogLines = ["Ahoy, mate. What kind of food do you want?", "Let me see what we've got here", "Hmm... canned tuna", "canned bitroots", "canned carrots", "canned potato knishes", "Oh, look surstromming", "It should certanly be banned as bio weapon"]
 
 [node name="Captain" parent="NPCs" instance=ExtResource("3_t4e54")]
 position = Vector2(889, -258)
 NPCName = "Captain"
 Frames = ExtResource("5_o0reb")
 DefaultDialogLine = "You should go check engine"
-DialogLines = ["Expedition is going good", "We got many new samples of", "the deep water wildlife", "Those sounds you heard", "it might be a magnificent creature", "You should go check engine", "I dont want to miss an opportunity", "to catch a new species"]
+DialogLines = ["Expedition is going good", "We got many new samples of", "the deep-sea wildlife", "Those sounds you heard", "it might be a magnificent creature", "You should go check engine", "I dont want to miss an opportunity", "to catch a new species"]
 
 [node name="Doctor" parent="NPCs" instance=ExtResource("3_t4e54")]
 position = Vector2(286, 255)
@@ -235,21 +235,21 @@ position = Vector2(575, -6)
 NPCName = "Nikolai"
 Frames = ExtResource("7_j5wfn")
 DefaultDialogLine = "I'm sick of the canned bread"
-DialogLines = ["I am sick of this canned food", "when i fall asleep i dream about", "some good old pizza", "And than i wake up", "Damn"]
+DialogLines = ["I am sick of this canned food", "when I fall asleep I dream about", "some good old pizza", "And than I wake up", "Damn"]
 
 [node name="Computer" parent="NPCs" instance=ExtResource("3_t4e54")]
 position = Vector2(1597, -12)
 NPCName = "Computer"
 Frames = ExtResource("10_medl6")
 DefaultDialogLine = "Sonar output processing are in progress"
-DialogLines = ["Welcome authorized user", "Unfortunatly you can't access database now", "Sonar output processing are in progress"]
+DialogLines = ["Welcome authorized user", "Unfortunatly you can't access database now", "Sonar output processing is in progress"]
 
 [node name="Engine" parent="NPCs" instance=ExtResource("3_t4e54")]
 position = Vector2(-359, 245)
 NPCName = "Engine"
 Frames = ExtResource("10_medl6")
 DefaultDialogLine = "You can go back to your room now"
-DialogLines = ["Tighten up the loose screws", "This should work for now", "Now i can return to my room"]
+DialogLines = ["Tighten up the loose screws", "This should work for now", "Now I can return to my room"]
 
 [node name="Player" parent="." instance=ExtResource("8_csxln")]
 position = Vector2(1054, 255)

scenes/Day2.tscn

@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@ position = Vector2(351, 14)
 NPCName = "Cook"
 Frames = ExtResource("4_7efhe")
 DefaultDialogLine = "Enjoy while it lasts"
-DialogLines = ["Ahhh you come for new can of fresh...", "delicious...", "canned...", "ration", "My food certanly have nothing to do", "with this headaches.", "Well time to brighten up this day", "Some special cans this time", "And no, this is not surstromming"]
+DialogLines = ["Ahhh you came for a new can of fresh...", "delicious...", "canned...", "ration", "My food certanly has nothing to do", "with these headaches.", "Well time to brighten up this day", "Some special cans this time", "And no, that is not surstromming"]
 
 [node name="Captain" parent="NPCs" instance=ExtResource("3_w8l5u")]
 position = Vector2(889, -258)
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ position = Vector2(286, 255)
 NPCName = "Doctor"
 Frames = ExtResource("6_m6fou")
 DefaultDialogLine = "Get back to your work"
-DialogLines = ["Nightmares and headache...", "What kind of headache epidemy goes on this ship?", "You are the fifth person who have come to me with this", "I have one suggestion: get back to work"]
+DialogLines = ["Nightmares and headache...", "What kind of headache epidemy goes on this ship?", "You're the fifth person to come to me with these symptoms.", "I have one suggestion: get back to work"]
 
 [node name="Ivan" parent="NPCs" instance=ExtResource("3_w8l5u")]
 position = Vector2(1307, 254)
@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ position = Vector2(575, -6)
 NPCName = "Nikolai"
 Frames = ExtResource("7_0mkl0")
 DefaultDialogLine = "I have a bad feeling about all of this..."
-DialogLines = ["Cook got something special this time", "All of this because of that strange nightmares", "You wont believe me I haven't dreamt about food this night.", "I have a bad feeling about all of this..."]
+DialogLines = ["Cook got something special this time", "All of this because of that strange nightmare", "You wont believe me I haven't dreamt about food this night.", "I have a bad feeling about all of this..."]
 
 [node name="Computer" parent="NPCs" instance=ExtResource("3_w8l5u")]
 position = Vector2(1597, -12)

scenes/Day3.tscn

@@ -207,28 +207,28 @@ position = Vector2(286, 255)
 NPCName = "Doctor"
 Frames = ExtResource("6_lwnpl")
 DefaultDialogLine = "Crew needs some sunlight and fresh air immidiatly"
-DialogLines = ["Ah, you again", "Have you seen those strange barnacle like creatures?", "Quite an intresting species if you ask me", "Do you know what is happening around there?", "I can't get in contact with the capitan", "Crew needs some sunlight and fresh air immidiatly", "Tell this to the captain if you see him"]
+DialogLines = ["Ah, you again", "Have you seen those strange barnacle like creatures?", "Quite an intresting species if you ask me", "Do you know what is happening around there?", "I can't get in contact with the capitan", "Crew needs some sunlight and fresh air immediatly", "Tell this to the captain if you see him"]
 
 [node name="Ivan" parent="NPCs" instance=ExtResource("3_s2s8w")]
 position = Vector2(1307, 254)
 NPCName = "Ivan"
 Frames = ExtResource("7_l8k40")
 DefaultDialogLine = "Sorry, no jokes today, pal"
-DialogLines = ["Sorry, no jokes today, pal", "Those headaches goes stronger today", "Maybe went a bit too hard on previous jokes", "Hehe", "Have you seen captain yesterday?"]
+DialogLines = ["Sorry, no jokes today, pal", "The headaches got worse today.", "Maybe went a bit too hard on previous jokes", "Hehe", "Have you seen captain yesterday?"]
 
 [node name="Eugene" parent="NPCs" instance=ExtResource("3_s2s8w")]
 position = Vector2(1326, 14)
 NPCName = "Eugene"
 Frames = ExtResource("7_l8k40")
 DefaultDialogLine = "Maybe I work too hard lately"
-DialogLines = ["We are getting closer to the source", "Sound is truly mesmerising", "...", "...", "Maybe I work too hard lately"]
+DialogLines = ["We are getting closer to the source", "The sound is truly mesmerising", "...", "...", "Maybe I work too hard lately"]
 
 [node name="Nikolai" parent="NPCs" instance=ExtResource("3_s2s8w")]
 position = Vector2(575, -6)
 NPCName = "Nikolai"
 Frames = ExtResource("7_l8k40")
 DefaultDialogLine = "I wish i was dreaming about pizza as always"
-DialogLines = ["You know", "...", "this nightmares", "They are getting more real", "I wish i was dreaming about pizza as always", "But at least now those canned food doesn't", "taste so terrible"]
+DialogLines = ["You know", "...", "these nightmares", "They are getting more real", "I wish I was dreaming about pizza as always", "But at least now this canned food doesn't", "taste so terrible"]
 
 [node name="Computer" parent="NPCs" instance=ExtResource("3_s2s8w")]
 position = Vector2(1597, -12)
@@ -242,7 +242,7 @@ position = Vector2(-359, 244)
 NPCName = "Engine"
 Frames = ExtResource("8_k42bg")
 DefaultDialogLine = "You can go back to your room now"
-DialogLines = ["You manually lower engine speed for it to not overheat", "You are sure it should break at this stress level", "But something keeps it together", "Maybe it's you who keeps doing a good job", "Maybe", "...", "you don't want to think about this", "You can go back to your room"]
+DialogLines = ["You manually lower engine speed to avoid overheating", "You are sure it should break at this stress level", "But something keeps it together", "Maybe it's you who keeps doing a good job", "Maybe", "...", "you don't want to think about this", "You can go back to your room"]
 
 [node name="Bridge door" parent="NPCs" instance=ExtResource("3_s2s8w")]
 position = Vector2(979, 131)

scenes/Day4.tscn

@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ position = Vector2(351, 14)
 NPCName = "Cook"
 Frames = ExtResource("4_av7ev")
 DefaultDialogLine = "Time to get cooking"
-DialogLines = ["You know those things", "You can make really good soup out of it", "Do you want some", "No?! Well i'll get you some canned food", "Here it is...", "You need to be prepared for arriving"]
+DialogLines = ["You know those things", "You can make really good soup out of it", "Do you want some", "No?! Well I'll get you some canned food", "Here it is...", "You need to be prepared for the arrival"]
 
 [node name="Captain" parent="NPCs" instance=ExtResource("3_vhb2r")]
 position = Vector2(889, -258)
@@ -207,14 +207,14 @@ position = Vector2(286, 255)
 NPCName = "Doctor"
 Frames = ExtResource("6_tudqg")
 DefaultDialogLine = "Get to the engine room and turn off the engine"
-DialogLines = ["Oh, good someone who are relativly sane on this ship", "I managed to get in contact with the captain", "but he seems to be completly insane", "Talking about arrival and other nonsence", "We should end all of this", "I have a plan", "Me with last sane people on this ship will break", "into the bridge", "And you should manually turn off the ships engine", "Whatever is happening", "we need to stop our fast approach to this source"]
+DialogLines = ["Oh, good someone who is relativly sane on this ship", "I managed to get in contact with the captain", "but he seems to be completly insane", "Talking about arrival and other nonsence", "We should end all of this", "I have a plan", "Me with the last sane people on this ship will break", "into the bridge", "And you should manually turn off the ships engine", "Whatever is happening", "we need to stop our fast approach to this source"]
 
 [node name="Ivan" parent="NPCs" instance=ExtResource("3_vhb2r")]
 position = Vector2(1307, 254)
 NPCName = "Ivan"
 Frames = ExtResource("7_cr07l")
 DefaultDialogLine = "I dont feel good"
-DialogLines = ["Feel better today", "But no jokes today, sorry", "Everytime I come up with a joke", "it feels like something is messing up with my toughts", "Two inmates are sitting at the submarine", "They are getting closer", "...", "I should really see the doctor", "Ah, doctor. He wanted to talk to you"]
+DialogLines = ["I feel better today", "But no jokes today, sorry", "Everytime I come up with a joke", "it feels like something is messing up with my toughts", "Two inmates are sitting at the submarine", "They are getting closer", "...", "I should really see the doctor", "Ah, doctor. He wanted to talk to you"]
 
 [node name="Eugene" parent="NPCs" instance=ExtResource("3_vhb2r")]
 position = Vector2(1326, 14)
@@ -242,13 +242,13 @@ position = Vector2(-359, 245)
 NPCName = "Engine"
 Frames = ExtResource("8_je535")
 DefaultDialogLine = "You can go back to your room now"
-DialogLines = ["Engine works at 110% capacity", "You pull the lever and mechanism stops", "You fill chills crawl down your spine", "Suddenly you pass out"]
+DialogLines = ["Engine works at 110% capacity", "You pull the lever and mechanism stops", "You fill a chill crawling down your spine", "Suddenly you pass out"]
 
 [node name="Bridge door" parent="NPCs" instance=ExtResource("3_vhb2r")]
 position = Vector2(979, 131)
 NPCName = "Bridge door"
 Frames = ExtResource("8_je535")
-DefaultDialogLine = "You feel that you will meet captain soon"
+DefaultDialogLine = "You feel that you will meet the captain soon"
 
 [node name="Deco" type="Node2D" parent="."]
 

scenes/Day5.tscn

@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ DefaultDialogLine = "Captain is waiting for you..."
 position = Vector2(889, -258)
 NPCName = "Captain"
 Frames = ExtResource("5_vvft0")
-DialogLines = ["As you see your small mutiny didnt work", "However i can congratulate you", "You will bathe in HIS glory", "Come closer my friend"]
+DialogLines = ["As you can see, your little mutiny didn't work", "However I want to congratulate you.", "You will bathe in HIS glory", "Come closer my friend"]
 
 [node name="Ivan" parent="NPCs" instance=ExtResource("3_4c2bg")]
 position = Vector2(1307, 254)
@@ -232,7 +232,7 @@ position = Vector2(-359, 245)
 NPCName = "Engine"
 Frames = ExtResource("8_8y5k0")
 DefaultDialogLine = "Captain is waiting for you..."
-DialogLines = ["Works at normal pace", "You try to stop it, but it doesnt still works", "Whatever is happening you need to see captain"]
+DialogLines = ["Works at normal pace", "You pull the lever, but the engine refuses to stop.", "Whatever is happening now, you must see the captain."]
 
 [node name="Deco" type="Node2D" parent="."]
 

scripts/Player.cs

@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ public partial class Player : CharacterBody2D
 				break;
 			case State.Wait:
 				// _camera.Offset = _cameraDefaultPosition;
-				HideChatLog(delta, 2);
+				HideChatLog(delta, 3);
 				break;
 			default:
 				throw new ArgumentOutOfRangeException();